Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 7 – Somebody Remembers Me

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1This chapter is going to suckLisbeth’s Smith Shop was a highly recommended shop on Floor 48 of Aincrad. It was a small pleasant house with a water wheel and a front porch with a rocking chair. The owner, Lisbeth, who happened to be Asuna’s best friend, took great pride in her work, constantly toiling to make the finest weapons. Some were hung on the wall while others were placed in display cases. Continue reading “Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 7 – Somebody Remembers Me”

Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 6 – The Fastest Sword

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Koloktos’s blade discs flew around the room like speeding frisbees of death. Mikoto and Asuna ducked, avoiding the attack. Neither of them had been able to get close enough to damage the giant automaton’s pulsating weak point. Koloktos would use its four arms to pulverize anyone who got too close. Continue reading “Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 6 – The Fastest Sword”

Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 5 – The Ancient Automaton

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Mikoto Misaka screamed as she hammered her sword against Red-Eyed XaXa’s blade. Nothing but blind anger flew through her mind. She attacked relentlessly as XaXa frantically tried to block all of Mikoto’s blows. Continue reading “Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 5 – The Ancient Automaton”

Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 4 – Gekota Packed My Lunch

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“W-whoa! Yikes…!”

Mikoto held onto the reigns of her steed for dear life as she clopped alongside Kirito and Asuna’s horses.

“You okay, Railgun?” said Asuna.

“She’s never ridden a horse before,” said Kirito. “She maxed out her speed stat, so she’s really never needed one.”

“Y-yeah… usually I just run wherever I need to go,” Mikoto muttered. “Whoa! Not that way, horse! Not that way!” Continue reading “Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 4 – Gekota Packed My Lunch”

Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 3 – The Flash and the Railgun

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1This chapter was intimidating and was gone in two passes. The first was the fix spelling and punctuation, as well as some grammar. The second pass was to rewrite some of the abysmal lines in the chapter.“Alright! Here’s how it’s going to go,” Asuna, also known as the Flash of the Knights of the Blood Oath, slammed her fist down on the round table in the dark meeting room. “We’ll lure it out into the fields, and while it’s busy killing NPCs, we’ll pounce on it and kill it.” Continue reading “Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 3 – The Flash and the Railgun”

Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 2 – The Railgun

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Mikoto lay in bed, dressed only in her undergarments. It was more comfortable this way. Weather in Aincrad changed based on the system. As it happened, tonight was rather hot and humid. No need for blankets, just a nice cool breeze. Continue reading “Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 2 – The Railgun”

Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 1 – World of the Sword

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1This paragraph originally started with the first instance of onomatopoeia in the story. I died a little inside, then proceeded to remove it. You’re welcome.The sounds of clashing blades reverberated through the large forest. The sound of desperate panting was also heard, as if somebody was fighting for her life. In a manner of speaking, she kind of was.2No, not “in a manner of speaking” and not “kind of”. The entire point of a death game is that you’re fighting for your life. Every battle in here was a battle for survival. Continue reading “Railgun Online Book 1 Chapter 1 – World of the Sword”

Railgun Online Book 1 – Prologue

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The girl sat in the dark room. It was an interrogation room, of course. She knew that. The people here wanted to study her, to see how the past two years had affected her. She knew that. She knew what these people wanted. But she couldn’t stop them.
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