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1This chapter is going to suckLisbeth’s Smith Shop was a highly recommended shop on Floor 48 of Aincrad. It was a small pleasant house with a water wheel and a front porch with a rocking chair. The owner, Lisbeth, who happened to be Asuna’s best friend, took great pride in her work, constantly toiling to make the finest weapons. Some were hung on the wall while others were placed in display cases. (more…)